Tuesday, January 1, 2008 by Indrajit
A Beginning-
Night-sky painted with dots and a Crescent,
Adieu ed and waited to a new advent,
cradling bygone year's slow depart.
To usher into a spirited start.
The dawn then, lit up the eastern Sky,
painted with random strokes of red,
so begins a journey anew,
tiptoeing over the lavish dew-spread.
Renal tunes of hope, churns the mind,
A new life's song every heart breathes in,
every soul holds on to the dreams again,
and dazzled eyes await many vistas unseen.
Indrajit ghosal
Copyright(c)reserved 2008.
Night-sky painted with dots and a Crescent,
Adieu ed and waited to a new advent,
cradling bygone year's slow depart.
To usher into a spirited start.
The dawn then, lit up the eastern Sky,
painted with random strokes of red,
so begins a journey anew,
tiptoeing over the lavish dew-spread.
Renal tunes of hope, churns the mind,
A new life's song every heart breathes in,
every soul holds on to the dreams again,
and dazzled eyes await many vistas unseen.
Indrajit ghosal
Copyright(c)reserved 2008.
lovely!
"The dawn then, lit up the eastern Sky,
painted with random strokes of red.."
loved the lines..
thts a grt way to describe the new yr
A charming '' vista'' of a new rise ......of our life...
woww..nice one, especially it being the first day of the year :)
wowwwww Indro.... its absolutely beautiful. loved evry line of it.
Renal tunes of hope, churns the mind,
A new life's song every heart breathes in,
every soul holds on to the dreams again,
and dazzled eyes await many vistas unseen.
.......so true...
i wish you a very happy new year.
may all your dreams come true.
tk cr
pree
:) :) :)
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Night-sky painted with dots and a Crescent,
Adieu ed and waited to a new advent,
cradling bygone year's slow depart.
To usher into a spirited start.
The dawn then, lit up the eastern Sky,
painted with random strokes of red,
so begins a journey anew,
tiptoeing over the lavish dew-spread.
}---------> so nicely depicted!
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Renal tunes of hope, churns the mind,
A new life's song every heart breathes in,
every soul holds on to the dreams again,
and dazzled eyes await many vistas unseen
}--------------> is it really the case? might be applicable for you guys but my eyes r not in a mood to wait for anything Potter like ... lol...
*** HAPPY NEW YEAR Indra :)LOTS OF LOVE & GOOD WISHES :) ***
imagery was mindblowing :):)
Very charming to read ...brings in a new soul along with a great new year ..!
Happy New Year Indro..!!
Banish all your worries and welcome joy,zest and laughter throughout the year and forever.!
I wish I could write poetry myself and not have to borrow lines from songs!! :))
Happy New Year!
Wonderful poem to begin the new year with...lovely words...have a wonderful new year!
What a way to usher in the new year!!!
a suggestion freelance for a card company... we all could use a refreshing note in the New Year cards...
nothing would be more special than your poem to celebrate the new year!
Lovely and picturesque! A truly lovely last stanza