A Beginning-


Night-sky painted with dots and a Crescent,
Adieu ed and waited to a new advent,
cradling bygone year's slow depart.
To usher into a spirited start.


The dawn then, lit up the eastern Sky,
painted with random strokes of red,
so begins a journey anew,
tiptoeing over the lavish dew-spread.

Renal tunes of hope, churns the mind,
A new life's song every heart breathes in,
every soul holds on to the dreams again,
and dazzled eyes await many vistas unseen.

Indrajit ghosal
Copyright(c)reserved 2008.

12 Sonatas:

    lovely!
    "The dawn then, lit up the eastern Sky,
    painted with random strokes of red.."

    loved the lines..

     

    thts a grt way to describe the new yr

     

    A charming '' vista'' of a new rise ......of our life...

     

    woww..nice one, especially it being the first day of the year :)

     

    wowwwww Indro.... its absolutely beautiful. loved evry line of it.

    Renal tunes of hope, churns the mind,
    A new life's song every heart breathes in,
    every soul holds on to the dreams again,
    and dazzled eyes await many vistas unseen.

    .......so true...

    i wish you a very happy new year.
    may all your dreams come true.

    tk cr
    pree
    :) :) :)

     

    {
    Night-sky painted with dots and a Crescent,
    Adieu ed and waited to a new advent,
    cradling bygone year's slow depart.
    To usher into a spirited start.


    The dawn then, lit up the eastern Sky,
    painted with random strokes of red,
    so begins a journey anew,
    tiptoeing over the lavish dew-spread.
    }---------> so nicely depicted!

    {
    Renal tunes of hope, churns the mind,
    A new life's song every heart breathes in,
    every soul holds on to the dreams again,
    and dazzled eyes await many vistas unseen
    }--------------> is it really the case? might be applicable for you guys but my eyes r not in a mood to wait for anything Potter like ... lol...

    *** HAPPY NEW YEAR Indra :)LOTS OF LOVE & GOOD WISHES :) ***

     

    imagery was mindblowing :):)

     

    Very charming to read ...brings in a new soul along with a great new year ..!

    Happy New Year Indro..!!
    Banish all your worries and welcome joy,zest and laughter throughout the year and forever.!

     

    I wish I could write poetry myself and not have to borrow lines from songs!! :))

    Happy New Year!

     

    Wonderful poem to begin the new year with...lovely words...have a wonderful new year!

     

    What a way to usher in the new year!!!

    a suggestion freelance for a card company... we all could use a refreshing note in the New Year cards...

    nothing would be more special than your poem to celebrate the new year!

     

    Lovely and picturesque! A truly lovely last stanza

     

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