The Eyes Beckon

The eyes beckon from afar,
to the oasis of the heart.
Ripples splash in whispers mellowed
in a lyrical stroke of Sonata.

The eyes paint my vibrant soul,
in bashful waves of dense blue.
My cosmic sky dwells encased-
safe beneath those eyelashes.

Indrajit Ghosal

20 Sonatas:

    This one is cute :)


    Ripples splash in whispers mellowed

    beautiful line! :)


    I hate it when I start imagining wht I read..(if its morbid!) but this time..I really loved the beautiful eyes! :)


    The eyes paint my vibrant soul,
    in bashful waves of dense blue.

    the most beautiful line i have read for ages :)


    Love and Blue, two beautiful hues.
    Well done, my friend...


    Nice one!!


    tumi to janoi ami ki feel korchi taina :p


    My cosmic sky dwells encased-
    safe beneath those eyelashes.

    nice safety vault this would be I am sure...

    P.S: the poem I have posted has nothing to do with my dad. It is infact a love poem. :-)


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    nir bheja chokhe ..
    cheye aachhi akaser paane ..
    dekhi adure jodi se aase ..
    bhabi eei kobita ..
    addhpora cigaret haate ..
    nirasai nir sesh ..anamikar assai..

    but those eyes never beckoned me ...!
    very well written man..!
    Jiooo Jioo ..!!


    Nice imagery :)


    chomotkar ekta onubhuti pelam bhai :)


    wonderful... keep writing.. :)


    i just started reading your blog. wonderful poems, keep writing



    I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be very good.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘Eternal Sonatas’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;

    BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!

    This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)



    u know...i hd commented ages back..dunno whr it is...its a beautiful poem


    as amazing as ever :)


    Very powerful ...


    As beautiful as ever..i think you astutely discovered that your poems have a feeling of a sonata about it..that's why you named it what it is?Maybe I am wrong.A lovely poem about trust and feelings..Admirable..though I wonder whether such unreality exists in the physical plane
    Cheers :)


    Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!


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