Love's Labour Lost
Sunday, January 18, 2009 by Indrajit
The songs of yore is today a lament,
the dreams border on sniffled nightmares-
Clouds spell a looming sadness,
restless soul to the memories chase.
The fountain that was brimming once,
subdued it falls in a random gait-
An ocean of love transpires to droplets,
Love breathes forlorn in faraway shores.
Crystal blue sky is touched up with gray,
the glowing eyes cringe with the stroke of light-
Undone promises to Eternity lays buried there-
where 'Love'- a beautiful epitaph today remains.
Indrajit Ghosal
the dreams border on sniffled nightmares-
Clouds spell a looming sadness,
restless soul to the memories chase.
The fountain that was brimming once,
subdued it falls in a random gait-
An ocean of love transpires to droplets,
Love breathes forlorn in faraway shores.
Crystal blue sky is touched up with gray,
the glowing eyes cringe with the stroke of light-
Undone promises to Eternity lays buried there-
where 'Love'- a beautiful epitaph today remains.
Indrajit Ghosal
this 1 really touched a chord!
'The fountain that was brimming once,
subdued it falls in a random gait
An ocean of love transpires to droplets,
Love breathes forlorn in faraway shores'
these lines were amazing!
It struck me inside!
I really liked the last paragraph..I actually started imagining the scene!
.....dramatic love story's End.....
Scenic picture!!! I can feel the pain of those bourned , inexorable love's drops....extraordinary metaphor....
..the ocean of love desperate floods on faraway shores...where love is now only a epitaph....
LOVELY, Lovely poem!
where love is now only a epitaph...
what a beautiful ode to the death of an emotion that stirs the soul.
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such a whirpool of emotions.. really greatly done.
your poems are among the best in bloggerville.. you got to seriously think about publishing.
"Undone promises to Eternity lays buried there-
where 'Love'- a beautiful epitaph today remains"
orre nah last 2 lines are beautiful , ki likhechhis baba ,... Ossadhoron
Amazinly well written!
want to know, what inspired you to write this poem.. very good, well expressed..
Deeps
Very well written
the pain flows thru the words
well done
brilliant work...
Undone promises to Eternity lays buried there-
where 'Love'- a beautiful epitaph today remains
loved the lines!!! gr8.. brill!
Indrajit, Love is such an fascinating theme, and here, yet another beautiful attempt at it...
Cheers
alada kore kichu bolar nai go. i simply love it.
That was such a touching rendition of pure emotion!
ah! dont you wonder what are the answers to those eternal questions? Or have you already found the answer?
I wonder!
:D