Wo.....

Tuesday, November 3, 2009 by Indrajit

Wo kabhi ek Bacchi, ek Nazuk chiz,
Jaise ek alhad srot Mann ke dehleez,
Jaise soyi aankhon me sapno ke rang -
Indradhanushi... aur ek uska Rang.....
Uska apna......

Wo kabhi ek dost, ek anant chavi,
Jaise Meera ka mann Shyam rang prati,
Jaise lajja se lipti Aasmaan aur laali,
Ujjwal..... mutthibhar Jeevan ki thali....
Ek saath......


Wo kabhi ek Maa, ek yaad, ek hansi,
Jaise ek vivash mann ki chah, khoi hui,
Jaise lautne ki chah un chau me kahin,
ek aangan.... ek pralep yaadon ka.
Wo Maa.....

Indrajit Ghosal

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8 Sonatas:

    On November 3, 2009 at 11:29:00 PM GMT+5:30 Arnav said...

    Amazing dude ..



    Keep Writing and Smiling :)

     
    On November 4, 2009 at 1:49:00 AM GMT+5:30 Matangi Mawley said...

    hey.. must say... tht was seriously gr8... esp loved the line "Jaise lajja se lipti Aasmaan aur laali.." beautiful thought..! also loved the "vivash mann ki chah.." part.. beautiful..

    keep writing!

     
    On November 5, 2009 at 4:22:00 AM GMT+5:30 Mansi said...

    awesome...so now the poet is turning into a kavi :)

     
    On November 11, 2009 at 12:00:00 AM GMT+5:30 Amandeep Singh said...

    Sir time has come you get ur work published!

     
    On November 12, 2009 at 2:35:00 AM GMT+5:30 Mansi said...

    i can't agree more with the above comment, indrajit!! you should totally get your work published!

     
    On November 12, 2009 at 11:20:00 AM GMT+5:30 Swatimala said...

    wowww...how lyrical

     
    On November 13, 2009 at 11:45:00 AM GMT+5:30 Krishnendu Mitra said...

    Orreeh .. ettta bhalo gaan hobe ... nicely braided lyrics..!!

     
    On November 18, 2009 at 10:57:00 PM GMT+5:30 Nameless Fameless said...

    its my turn to write this ...


    THIS COULD BE A GREAT SONG !! ... i swear it ! ... really .. a very melodious composition Indrajit !

     

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