A Promise
Wednesday, October 28, 2009 by Indrajit
The speck of dew at my door,
silenced the screaming mind within,
I knew it was an Encore,
of a promise you made me then.
Every winter a silent blue,
ever since a Spring Maiden's left,
'diamonds' once the eyes that hold,
Icicles they turned - gray and cold.
Promised you once amidst the haze,,
before you slept one last time -
To visit me on such winters harsh,
& place one lost 'diamond' that's mine.
Indrajit Ghosal
silenced the screaming mind within,
I knew it was an Encore,
of a promise you made me then.
Every winter a silent blue,
ever since a Spring Maiden's left,
'diamonds' once the eyes that hold,
Icicles they turned - gray and cold.
Promised you once amidst the haze,,
before you slept one last time -
To visit me on such winters harsh,
& place one lost 'diamond' that's mine.
Indrajit Ghosal
speechless i m
hats off to u.
"'diamonds' once the eyes that hold,
Icicles they turned - gray and cold."
beautiful indr.. loved it..! :)
promises!!! promises!!!
i hate promises coz now i feel gray and cold!!!
ask me not Indrajit!
:(
Beautiful! Loved the comparison of the teardrop to Diamond...
You are fantastic.
this 1 made me go wow...as always
Amazing Poetry ...
:)
Khub sundor .
Promises..always a hard push within... very well written my friend.. very very very well written..
the words are so.. bold so beautiful..
shotti-e khub shundor .. just like diamonds !
thanx .. u din read d other poem ..words and feelings !! .. do read dat too .. and thank u again for dropping by
i shall keep that in mind :) thank you again !
You just keep getting better man...
How have you been?
can't understand this...:)