O Heart!
Thursday, March 19, 2009 by Indrajit
Bruised O heart ! why wary you be,
Colors sputtered in red so long!
Havoc outlived your recesses,
Alive! O How you can still be?
Hit and mishit, the game is on,
in pieces of slivers you breathe,
aren't you hurt the most O heart?
Heart O heart ! How there You still live?
Loved and disowned, in spite's cauldron,
What madness makes you so calm.
They came for you again, you Loner!
O Mercy be upon your soul.
Dissolve , disappear run I say!
for you must live and live O please!
Scream in in the rage of reddish glow,
you aren't beaten, no you are not.
Copyright(c) reserved Indrajit Ghosal 2008
Colors sputtered in red so long!
Havoc outlived your recesses,
Alive! O How you can still be?
Hit and mishit, the game is on,
in pieces of slivers you breathe,
aren't you hurt the most O heart?
Heart O heart ! How there You still live?
Loved and disowned, in spite's cauldron,
What madness makes you so calm.
They came for you again, you Loner!
O Mercy be upon your soul.
Dissolve , disappear run I say!
for you must live and live O please!
Scream in in the rage of reddish glow,
you aren't beaten, no you are not.
Copyright(c) reserved Indrajit Ghosal 2008
i loved the whole poem, esp the last stanza....
TK,
waaaaaaaaa hoyeche????????
Amazing last paragraph! =)
You wrote it b'fully!
U described the emotional functioning of the heart perfectly. Each pain comes out almost screams.
I really wish that next time you write you write about all the joy that the loner experiences when it finds its match. :-)
Pain!!
Well put
Loved ur style of writing
powerful and enigmatic. .
.... pain and patience:suffering'S origin....WONDERFUL RELIEVED !
Beautifully expressed.. as always though.. your poems, though sad at times are really a treat to those who love good poetry :)