Thursday, December 18, 2008 by Indrajit
I witness the impassioned deliverance-
upon your rosy feet by the denizens-
the unruly chants proclaiming your Supreme-
the conch shells reverberates-
into the heart, seeping slowly
slowly- absorbing
into the entire revelled existence of the Devotees.
I stand nowhere among them.
I stand faraway with you Mother,
for you are mine and so you remain.
There is festive rage there Mother
the uproaring devotees gather
in stupefied devotion seeking your blessing
everyone prays for everyone-
families unite on the other side of the threshold.
There's joy in the surround -
You the revered Mother is Home-
your Homecoming- Unites Mortals.
I, a Mortal too, stand nowhere among them.
you dwell in my soul and so it be...
I know , I am at Home with you.
for you are mine, and so you remain.
Copyright(c)Indrajit ghosal 2008
no words to appreciate.
beautiful, matured and a deep poem with a tinge of sadness. par beyond excellence.
mother is with us..inside our heart..inside our soul even if u r far from the crowd because heart is whr love n respect resides. bng a part of crowd dost help.
"You the revered Mother is Home-
your Homecoming- Unites Mortals"
lovely verse.. especially these lines..
music 2 the soul!
absolutely charismatic, teach me some poetry plz :(
I, a Mortal too, stand nowhere among them.
you dwell in my soul and so it be...
I know , I am at Home with you.
for you are mine, and so you remain.
now that is pure love , between the MOTHER and her child
absolutely lovely :)
Wonderful poem, Indrajit!
Merry Xmas and a Wonderful 2009!
JP
...when memory's fire gets at skin, thats a SCAR...and it never disappear...never!....I'm still feeling that sweet shiver of a mother's love ..it invaded me just from the beginning.....
... which are the memorys who dont glow????...
"I, a Mortal too, stand nowhere among them.
you dwell in my soul and so it be...
I know , I am at Home with you.
for you are mine, and so you remain."
an expression from deep in side the heart for devine mother....absolutely wonderful....
really really nice...
i love the connect u have with the Goddess. You never fail to respect her and at the same time share such a relation that you call her Mother with the right of a favoured son.
very beautiful.. and deep, and powerful too... made a big impression :)
so powerful! really gr8!!
just great piece of work
I stand nowhere among them.
I stand faraway with you Mother,
for you are mine and so you remain.
Maa dekha de ebbar ... ohh ki lekha ... maa goo .... baba tor choron dhuli de aamaai .. ki likhechhis .. !! jioo khepa ..!
really nice bit of work here...different and real..
refreshing for a change
PS: wanted to follow your blog but couldn't see a link !!