Monday, September 15, 2008 by Indrajit
Some of my poems from Yesterdays:-
The Dew....
Hazed fogs dawned at midnight,
and placed a tender shining dew,
over a greener grass that sparkled bright.
The Dew innocent, lay on the tip of the grass,
and swayed with the grass when
the wind whispered Sonatas abound. (**Sonata is a kind of musical cmposition)
The Dew , silent , lonely dew,
breathed lulllaby to it's new found delight,
With gentle moist touch, it glazed all sweetness and light.
And with the first kiss of the crimson morn,
rolled down from the grass blade slender---
The quivering, lonely, little drop of Dew.
The end of "The Dewdrop."
Copyright(c)reserved 2008 . Indrajit Ghosal.
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Who am I , but a piece of you.
who am I , but a lost hue,
who am I , none , but U.
Who am I , but born anew.
Everytime i will die,
and so will i rise,
nay, am not th Phoenix,
but I am 1 of ur Your Chosen Few..
copyright(c) indrajit.g
The Dew....
Hazed fogs dawned at midnight,
and placed a tender shining dew,
over a greener grass that sparkled bright.
The Dew innocent, lay on the tip of the grass,
and swayed with the grass when
the wind whispered Sonatas abound. (**Sonata is a kind of musical cmposition)
The Dew , silent , lonely dew,
breathed lulllaby to it's new found delight,
With gentle moist touch, it glazed all sweetness and light.
And with the first kiss of the crimson morn,
rolled down from the grass blade slender---
The quivering, lonely, little drop of Dew.
The end of "The Dewdrop."
Copyright(c)reserved 2008 . Indrajit Ghosal.
*******************************
Who am I , but a piece of you.
who am I , but a lost hue,
who am I , none , but U.
Who am I , but born anew.
Everytime i will die,
and so will i rise,
nay, am not th Phoenix,
but I am 1 of ur Your Chosen Few..
copyright(c) indrajit.g
arre wah! kamaal hai ;)
'the dew'...... wowwww what a lovely n beautiful topic to write on. dew- so ordinary but reflects so much simplicity, innocence n purity from within. beautiful n lively composition. n d ending... wowww just awesome.... it made the 'end' of dew drop an immortal incidence :)
the poem tells readers that u r totaly in love with 'Dew' ... is it d reason for liking mountain dew so much.. :P lol .... jokes apart... i think u sud not give the meanings of any of the words used in d poem within d poem itself...not evn d reasons for writing something(unless it's sum exceptional case). let the readers search d meanings on thr own...let them interpret it on thr own way.
@ 2nd poem.... its so innocent yet deep that i dont hv words to tell u how much i love it.
keep it up.
tk cr
:):) :)
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....the dew : your life'S freshness....gladness trickled from the sky like a blessing.... thats the dew ,thats your poem !..like a miracle....
....who are you ?...a ray from the sun radiateing only love....
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Boddo Sweet poem ..!
i remember loving tht poem on dew the 1st time i read it...and it sounded even more amazing this time
keep writing...u write like a dream
lovellllllllyyyyyy poem dew was
stunner
and who am i such an introspective write
BRAVO :)