In crowded Mart..

iN the still solace of the towering night,
littered with nothings, i lay in sombre,
I seek freedom , i seek my world,
bring them back, O my solitude dear.


The harangues and the stilted flow,
of words all around in pompous show,
i yearn a glimpse of the blissed sight,
in the blabbers and boasts of spurious delight.

AH being lonely without the Solitude's shine,
as if life's a mirage , mirroring me insane.
Beloved solitude, if you not come,
to chase my horizon now, I must run.
Indrajit ghosal

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    Beloved solitude, if you not come,
    to chase my horizon now, I must run.


    loved these lines

    i had once read some where that- Wat is lonliness to fools is a blessed solitude for the divine

    nice one :)

     

    ......Your wish of recovering temporary lost Solitude invades me..... beeing only for It,reposing on It....awakeing up only with both of you.....Happy THAT yours Solitude!........very touching lines who remembered me a day of endless files of my sadnesses.....

     

    loved the last 2 lines...

    reminded me how much i love solitude

     

    I particularly liked that line "as if life is a mirage, mirroring me insane" .. amaznng and so true!

     

    ....Congrats for Blog of the Day Aaward ! ....nourish a romanian reader's hungry soul !!!

     

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    "life's a mirage , mirroring me insane". .... i loved this line the most. i cud actually relate to this line coz i blv in this world full of sanes i am insanely sane. :P LOL

    lovely poem.solitude..every heart seeks it once in a while.

    as per my own feelings are concerned "I love to be alone. I never found the companion that's so companionable as solitude. "

    TAKE CARE
    :) :) :)

     

    I read it more than a couple of times .... it suits the mood so well


    Alok

     

    lovely words...you have captured and penned the solitary moments of our life wonderfully through words...we all experience such kind of similar feelings...beautifully written!

     

    Bravo!!!

    How I long for tht solitude?

    Simply awesome pal.

    keep it rollin;)

     

    Beloved solitude, if you not come,
    to chase my horizon now, I must run.


    loved em!

     

    amazing !! you rock man

     

    just beautiful... yes it's really so... i read it thrice at a row... n now my dil mange(mang raha hai) more :)

     

    I loved this one! :)

     

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