To The Holy Mother -A Nonet

Arrival:-

Autumn's Chariot heralds Mother,
Spirits arise, gusto in air,
returns Home damsel Divine,
Bright hearts, festive sublime,
Wait for a year ends,
Joyous abounds,
Homecoming,
Welcome
Maa..

Departure;-

Grief-struck children, offer last prayers,
sweet sorrow of parting lingers,
Four days festive galore, ends,
emptiness, unheard sighs,
Reddened face, moist eyes,
Dawning Depart,
Sunken heart,
Adieu,
Maa..

Indrajit Ghosal
Copyright(c)indrajitghosal

P.S-- "Reddened face" is referred to the smearing of vermillon on the last day of celebration
by the women-folk.

NONET: A nonet has nine lines. The first line has 9 syllables, the second line 8 syllables, the third line 7 syllables, etc... until line nine finishes with 1 syllable. It can be on any subject and rhyming is optional.

Syllable Counting of the Write;-

line 1 - 9 syllables Au/tumn's Cha/ri/ot he/ralds Mo/ther
line 2 - 8 syllables Spi/rits a/rise, gus/to /in /air
line 3 - 7 syllables re/turns Home dam/sel Di/vine
line 4 - 6 syllables Bright /hearts, fes/tive sub/lime
line 5 - 5 syllables Wait/ for/ a /year/ ends
line 6 - 4 syllables jo/yous/ a/bounds
line 7 - 3 syllables Home/coming
line 8 - 2 syllables wel/come
line 9 - 1 syllable Maa

14 Sonatas:

    That was Brilliant :)

     

    Orre Jioo ...Darun ..Jioo ..!!
    Great ..!!

     

    excellent. khub e shundor. kp experimenting.u r a brilliant writtr.

    tk cr
    :) :) :)

     

    Indrajit, you write beautiful poetry.I love the idea of a nonet. Maybe I will try it sometime myself. I'm so glad you commented on my blog so that I could find yours. I will be a frequent guest here I'm sure. Thank you for visiting my blog and taking time to comment. Please return again soon.
    Sallyt
    http://sallyt.typepad.com

     

    i love the experiments..:) and yeah nice work... :) nonnet..may be id write something inthe same style for u some day bro..cheers!

     

    daron....captured the pujo mood brilliantly

     

    Awesome write Indrajit!
    Loved every line...
    Cheers
    JP

     

    " a gr8 poet of our times " says it all !!

     

    awesome....

    i thing poetry is an artistic science....

    n u have balanced the science n the art of poetry, perfectly to the 't'.

    hats off!

     

    Truly beautiful and the structure never took away any of its feeling.Loved it as it is buddy

     

    Isn't it tough to come up with stuff to fit into this "rule"?? Though I can see you've done a good job of it! :)

     

    Just amazing one!
    I'm charmed...
    truely...
    there r so many things to learn 4m u...

    I wud b glad to interact wid u... may b via orkut... my orkut name is "LW" ...

    4m ur surname it seems dat u r a bangali... if i'm right, pls spare sm time to visit my newly made bengali blog: http://kagojphul.blogspot.com

    take care... see u..

     

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    Sorry for offtopic

     

    Very nicce!

     

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