It's You I feel.....

My petals of love remain strewn still,

A heartbeat worth oceans roar, reel,

Every word in the air storms past, unhealed.

& I wait & I wander & it’s You i feel.


Dreams infinite peel off one by one

It’s Guardian- the lonely nights,

Who, to your pruned Meadows, take flight

I sleepwalk images & it’s You i feel.


Indrajit G

9 Sonatas:

    :)

    Your poems never stop to amuse me..

    Truly some relations are so strong that even if we stop meeting or talking , their images still linger in our mind ..

     

    Memories or Muse (?) generateing swweet lines ...keep delighting us !!

     

    Miss your verses so often..it's more like a Love Lullaby!! truly amazing! love is so felt in each line..gr8 one!

     

    mesmerizing!! beautiful lines !!!

     

    Very Lyrical ..!!!It would make a good song ..!

     

    Nicely woven piece.

     

    Lovely words man!

     

    Oh my God. What IMAGERY.
    Please update now.

     

    nice... felt incomplete though... might be my lack of understanding :)
    so how are you buddy?....

     

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