A Little More -
Monday, June 8, 2009 by Indrajit
A Little more of my Sky Mama,
A little more of the tender Breeze,
A little more of the hazed fondness
A little more of your renal kiss.
A Little more of my share Mama,
A litrle more of the lost sliver,
A little more of your timeless refuge,
A little more of the mellowed whisper..
Indrajit Ghosal
A little more of the tender Breeze,
A little more of the hazed fondness
A little more of your renal kiss.
A Little more of my share Mama,
A litrle more of the lost sliver,
A little more of your timeless refuge,
A little more of the mellowed whisper..
Indrajit Ghosal
It's a masterpiece...You are a genius in writing, yaar, and frankly I'm nowhere near your skills. I am both your bro & friend...I'm not in orkut, no profile there...if you give your e-mail I would contact you there, mine is 'galadrielgoldberry@yahoo.com'
Thanks for the heart-rending comment, I was so elated I went through it about ten times...
Take care
Good Luck
a little more is al wat is needed at times.. :-)
beautiful lines.. :-)
subtle .. very rare and beautiful lines ..
beautiful lines set out in a compact way
a theme which touches every one who might read it
would have been better as a post for mother's day i believe
good to see you writing after all this while
long since i've been active on the blogging circuit! hope u remember me..
as for this post, i really want to know how you manage to do it every single time?! brilliant post! :)
beautiful :)
A little more of life :D
Lovely words!!
That was short..
We want A little more!
....Mom's time...more or less eficient on passing through life....
Thank You! I am indeed a lot touched. Do check your mailbox. I've posted some emails, hopefully they reach you.
U know me.
Bro
very nice....lovely little poem
A nice ode to a mother.
But I failed to understand the meaning of "renal kiss".
Nice work...
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