Stillborn.....

Beyond the hills and through the dales,
there floats the swerve of shapely clouds,
The veiled sun in it's primeval guise,
Night's dewdrops beneath me skates.

Beyond my heart and through the soul,
lumps dormant whirl in crisscross lanes,
A veil of smile , untied shoelace.
My stillborn love, my ashened fireplace.


Indrajit Ghosal

18 Sonatas:

    HOW do u manage to do this every single time??!!! it's fantastic!

     

    i actually like how it sounds, but honestly I do not know half of the words there and too lazy to check with the dictionary now :P

     

    hey.. beautiful thought... totally loved it!

     

    another miracle.. no doubt your pen has magic, can i borrow that ?? :P

    Love
    AL

     

    The poignancy of this one was unmatched. But I sincerely hope that 2010 brings a lot of joy in ur life and your lines. :-)

     

    so soulful! u shld consider publishing ur work

     

    I admire how you pen such wonderful thoughts...you really are a born poet!

    Please visit my blog....:)

    Thanks!

     

    Adbhut ..!!!Deeply Affecting , How u are able to create such impressions, i am amazed ...!!

     

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    Nice thoughts Indra....
    As always ur excellent...:

     

    I ve been telling him...publishing!!!!

     

    beautiful sad romantic poem ? masterpiece !

     

    Damn...I just closed my eyes and repet by memory lirics I love soo much : ''Beyond my heart and through the soul,
    lumps dormant whirl in crisscross lanes,
    A veil of smile , untied shoelace.
    My stillborn love, my ashened fireplace.''


    MAY I RECITE IT ON SHTYLE.FM?..SAY YES....

     

    Thanks everyone.

    @ Mom - As you like.

     

    You seem to embrace the power of silence as a hand would fit in a glove...Masterful piece! Loved it!

     

    Amazing :) you should seriously think of publishing your work :)

    Came across this site, should be of use to you,
    http://serenewoods.com/

     

    soothing again!!

     

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    Was thinking this would be a perfect way to introduce myself!

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