A Place

A place of all places I did know,
Where reposed the restive soul,
far from the illusions of grandeur,
far from the trumpets of console.


Where went the Castles of yore?
- the Hero, waned away with time,
Every sand that fell from hourglass,
Every battle the Hero never won!!


Solitude! hark! let the role reverse,
Not you, but me, let me you chase!,
Encore of the 'Beauty, lost and found'.
A run towards the crimson life's maze.


Beauty - in the Beloved's Carol.
Bliss - in the ache of a song,
Life that waits to be tickled yet,
That is where I do belong.

Indrajit Ghosal

15 Sonatas:

    'Life that waits to be tickled yet,
    That is where I do belong.'

    beautiful lines

     

    Not you, but me, let me you chase!,

    BRILLIANT :)

     

    "A place of all places" may ultimately lie within ourselves, in the final insight. Great piece of poetry, made me wander and wonder...
    Cheers great poet!!!

     

    ....amazing place!...I still havent knew it.....cause i still dont know were do I belong to.....amazing poem.....congrats.

     

    i loved the third stanza the most.. and the last 2 lines.
    Wonderful!

     

    Beauty - in the Beloved's Carol.
    Bliss - in the ache of a song,
    Life that waits to be tickled yet,
    That is where I do belong.
    .................................. :)

     

    Where went the Castles of yore?
    - the Hero, waned away with time,
    Every sand that fell from hourglass,
    Every battle the Hero never won!!

    .............................. :D B-)

     

    Beautiful...
    The place issss.... 'amazing'!
    Awesome feel and the way it speaks it mind blowing..:)
    The ending was the best!
    Indrajit, this is exactly where you belong...the blogville on this dias!!!
    Too good...keep writing!

     

    Lovely words mate...
    As Always!!!

    :)

     

    as always, wonderful! :)

     

    Beautiful Indrajit :)

    Please collect your award from my blog .. Congrats :)

     

    Very beautiful..


    Jolieess:-)

     

    very nice ... very melodious

     

    once again.. an extremely beautiful work frm u!

    u know.. i think sme one should gie it a nice tune..

     

    Awesome feel..u are truly talented dear.
    Goodday!!

     

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