Ek shaam thodi maili si


Ek shaam thodi maili si,
Dhup ki pighalti lau ki tarah -
wo shaam kay aanchal kay rang me,
ranga hai aaj ye mann bhi-
ye shaam thodi maili si....

Ghar ko chale bawra hawa,
peeche reh gaye us hawa ke
chore hue kuch bikhre panne,
maano mere Mann kay swarup ho jaisa,
Koi sajaakar, fir bikharkar cher gaya.
wo shaam.... thodi maili si....

Ek aasmaan mera reh gaya,
ek hansi chuke chali gayee,
ek mera aks reh gaya dhundla sa,
us dhundli shaam me pighal gaya-
Ek wo shaam.. thodi maili si...

Indrajit Ghosal

18 Sonatas:

    jiohhh :)

     

    bahut khoob!!!!
    nice one..
    I like the repetition of the phrase '..wo shaam..thodi maili si'..:)

     

    bahut khoob... mausam ka asar ho raha hai janab par...

    tareef-e-qabil hai yeh panktiyaan. :-)

     

    hey .. nice try..
    but still some probability of improvement.. :)

     

    subhan allah !! bohot acchha ... too gooood !

     

    aro ekbar porte elam kobita ta.. shotti khub sundor hoeche .. khub sundor..

     

    hehe .. sorry .. i came again to read the poem .. too good man ..too good.

     

    are no need to thank me for this. . and tomar fav food dekhe to bujhlam "khaNti" bangali .. amar o segulo khub e bhalo lage. . expect i guess d choco pudding ..

     

    u inspired me to write a hindi poem .. do drop in and let me know :)

     

    Very beautiful :-)

     

    So you are away .. i guess that is why i am not able to read some classic poetry..

     

    okay . now its depressing to not being able to read any of your poems.. are so VERY far away u cant jot down some lines ??

     

    aare etake gaan banano jai na...
    kono suroker chena nei tor??
    eto amazing lyrics, gaan banale baro bhalo Gazal habe re...

     

    mersmerizing!

     

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