Smile-- A Nonet

Lit the faint feel in twilights mellow,
Wade past all glooms in dazzling show,
Spring forever ripens heart,
golden moments behold,
everlasting glow,
radiance unfolds,
Sepia,
once more,
Smile..

Tears--A Nonet

"Where thou lost O elusive? Appear.
ye dried or shying to sear,
Hear thy plea, O please let go,
Heavy heart ,seeketh thy flow,
Chastise, unburden,
sorrows, pent-ups,
I command
Tears
Flow"

A nonet is never done to bring out the contrasts of emotions.These are two different Nonets.

NONET:
A nonet has nine lines. The first line has 9 syllables, the second line 8 syllables, the third line 7 syllables, etc... until line nine finishes with 1 syllable. It can be on any subject and rhyming is optional.
Syllable Counting of the Write;-
line 1 - 9 syllables Where/ thou/ lost/ O/e/lu/sive/ Ap/pear.
line 2 - 8 syllables Ye/ dried/ or /shy/ing /to/ se/ar
line 3 - 7 syllables Hear/ my/ plea, O /please /let/ go
line 4 - 6 syllables Heavy /heart ,seek/eth /thy /flow
line 5 - 5 syllables Chas/tise un/bur/den
line 6 - 4 syllables so/rrows/ pent/ups,
line 7 - 3 syllables I/ com/mand
line 8 - 2 syllables te/ars
line 9 - 1 syllable Flow.

Indrajit ghosal
Copyright(c)2007indrajitghosal

8 Sonatas:

    how do you do it again and again?

    u r truly a genius...

     

    Again an amazing creation!
    I'm really not endowed enuf to comment analytically against your write ups...
    so what i can is gv u a standing ovation...
    Smile n Tears both r so fine dat i cant kp anyone above da other...
    kp ur trend obverflowing...
    :)

     

    Brilliant !!!!

    the smile was beautiful
    i liked tears a lot they was u command it flow and let the burden out was simply superb

    gr8 ones Indr :):)

     

    I confess I did not know about this form of poetry. This is a very interesting write you posted here, bravo!
    Cheers
    JP

     

    Sneher indro ,

    Yet another back to back good nonet ....cheers ....!!
    Havoc ..!!Mindblowing .!!!

    eeetti ,

    Krishnendu

     

    I new it! you are my descovery....

     

    lovely... evrybdy cant write in nonete form but u master this art. kp it up.

    tk cr
    :) :) :)

     

    you know wat? u r amazing indu! you bring true meaning to poems!

     

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